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I think what I could really improve on in the final essay is making sure that I include some key things. For example, I got scored a 0 in three categories which were correct work cited, MLA citations, and a creative title. I lacked to incorporate these three things which resulted in an absence of points. To make a creative title I can simply use a characteristic of my character in the play and the  way that she behaves for example I could make my title the overbearing wishes of a single mother. This title can work in some cases because Amanda is a single mother who has so many expectations but she doesn’t know how to control her emotions to make it not so overwhelming.one of my strong suits where analyzing the quotes and giving good details on my performance and performance strategies. I can work on also coming with a more powerful thesis and putting it at the end of my into paragraph. I lost some points also with having a good use of topic and ending sentences. Which means that I ...

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I think what really made the poem pop was the lighting and sound effects. For example in nans poem interpretation I think her sound effects were really important and hey helped her performance so much. Especially in the beginning it set an emotion to the poem. It gave off the overall impression for be performance and of the poem. I honk the same about my performance I think the sound helped my performance tremendously. I had lightning strikes in the background of my performance and so it made the poem come alive and it allowed you to picture the poem in real life. Another thing that also was helpful was in josh’s , and David’s performance was the props. The props were so important because it helped to visualize the feeling and tone of the poem. If gave the poem character,and it was easier to follow in the performances I think something that can hurt a poem is not enough representation of the meaning of the poem. I think when the audience can’t relate to the feeling of the poem that you...