reflection on final


I think I individually did a good job on my groups final scene. we decided to choose a very emotional part of the play and so we really had to bring it with the emotion. I think we all did a good job remembering our lines. we did at times forget our lines and slip up. there was one time in the play where I said "you work night too" instead of "oh that’s so ambitious you work nights too" so I throw off nan a little bit when it was time for her to reply because she remembered it as my original lines. that was a noticeable mistake that we made as a group, because of the fact that we could have recovered from that better. another time I felt like I slipped up with my lines was while I was arguing to David and I skipped a part in my lines. this happened because I was trying to talk too fast and I wasn’t thinking about my lines while I was talking, I was trying to get in character. though these things did happen I think as a whole we didn't do a poor job displaying our part of the play. one of all of our strengths throughout the play was staying in character throughout the entire play. David did a good job switching emotions in the play when he was arguing with my (Amanda) and when he was saying his final monologue. when he was saying his final monologue, he was more depressed and had a lower tone. versus when he was arguing with me he was much louder and had an aggressive tone. I think I did a good job at that as well. for example, when I was having a conversation with nan (Jim) I was more showing a fake emotion for Amanda’s character because she is usually very judgmental and aggressive but I was kind, and sort of loving. just to show Jim that I was un bothered by the fact that he had a fiancé. I think a strong point to our play was the lighting and the music. I think that enhanced the play a lot more and it helped to bring the feeling and emotion to the audience. But the main thing I think my group did well was being balanced in our individual roles and the length of our play. We all had a good amount of lines and a balance in roles. We all were equally important in the play and we had a very vital role in play. We all connected to each other and built off of each other even when we messed up. We all could have worked on the blocking and movement. Me and David did move around a little more than me and nan but I think we could have all showed more movement throughout the entire play. 

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